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Subject:Fic: Clean Slate (SGA Pre-Slash)
Time:04:51 pm
Title: Clean Slate
Category: Pre-slash, angst, emotional h/c, episode tag
Word Count: ~~2,200
Rating: T
Pairings: John and Rodney
Characters: Just the boys
Warnings: None

A/N: I have to say that the episode Irresponsible left me.... wanting more. It was lacking in so many areas from major plot holes, inconsistencies with previous eps, not to mention the rather blase end to one of the best bad guys they've ever had on the show that I felt compelled to write something. And it just happened to end up pre-slash... although if you really wanted to, you could close your eyes and pretend that it's just really, really close gen, that's how tame it is. *G* Special thanks to Koschka for the beta.   Oh, and I really, truly, am writing that Cabin Fever fic, I just keep getting distracted.  ;-)

Spoilers: Spoilers for any episode that involves Kolya or Lucius, so, yeah, big ones for Irresponsible. Oh, and Hide and Seek gets mentioned, too. 

Summary: And if he could just finish this task he had set for himself, clean away the residue of that single bullet that had traveled down the chamber and into Kolya’s chest, John would maybe, just maybe, be able to put the hostility and hate and hurt of that piece of shit rivalry behind him. Episode tag for Irresponsible


Clean Slate
by liketheriver
 
John should have left for the debrief a good five minutes before. He should have been walking through the hall with his nine-mil strapped to his thigh instead of sitting at his desk with the pieces of the Baretta spread before him and the smell of gun oil slicking the air. He could try and tell himself that the reason he wasn’t rushing to finish up and leave was that these things never started on time, that McKay was always late anyway, so why hurry up just to wait for the man?
 
Distractions. Rodney was easily distracted… by the lab, by food, by scantly clad alien women. And John had evidently decided that he could use a distraction, himself. Because he couldn’t blame McKay for the fact that he hadn’t redressed in his expedition uniform after his shower, that he’d instead pulled on his sweats and pulled out his cleaning kit and decided right then and there that his gun needed cleaning and by God, that’s what he was going to do.
 
Rod, patches, oil. He methodically pulled each from the case then set to work disassembling the gun. Disassembling. There was a lot more to be disassembled than the gun, just as there was a lot more to be distracted from than a debrief. You would think running into Lucius would be just about the worst thing that could happen in one day. Ends up, that was the fucking highlight. Genii, a bomb, his team captured, Lucius babbling, Kolya threatening…
 
Kolya. That son of a bitch. He should have killed that bastard when… Well, that wasn’t a regret that would come again. Not after today. Not after that single shot. He eyed the magazine sitting off to the side even as he jammed the rod down the barrel to wipe it clean. Wipe it clean like a slate. A clean slate. Now that would be worth having. And if he could just finish this task he had set for himself, clean away the residue of that single bullet that had traveled down the chamber and into Kolya’s chest, John would maybe, just maybe, be able to put the hostility and hate and hurt of that piece of shit rivalry behind him.
 
He’d ended up in a blood feud with the Genii commander by doing his job. He’d been protecting the city, protecting his friends, and, nothing personal, but when you came into his home and threatened his family, John Sheppard had a tendency to shoot your ass. That bullet evidently hadn’t taken, and the next one on the Brotherhood planet he never fired, and the next one with the Wraith he was never given the chance shoot. But the one today had all three and Kolya was dead as a result.
 
John should have felt… what? Happy? Relieved? Satisfied? Because he didn’t feel any of those things. He felt numb. Numb and hollow and in need of disassembling and a thorough cleaning himself. He deserved more. After everything they had been through because of Kolya, he deserved more.
 
The ring at his door came sooner than expected and John realized he’d evidently managed to distract himself better than he thought he could.  He hadn’t even heard them try to call him on the radio before Elizabeth came to look for him. He had no doubt that’s who was outside. She thought she understood. After all, Kolya had held a gun to her head, threatened to kill her during the failed attempt to take Atlantis, had nearly managed to take her through the gate. She feared and loathed the man, John was sure of it. And maybe she was as conflicted about the whole mess as much as John was. But she couldn’t understand; as much as she could empathize, she couldn’t know what it was like or why.
 
When he didn’t answer, the door opened on its own and instead of Weir, Rodney’s head popped in. “Sheppard? Oh, hey, there you are.”
 
“What are you doing here?” John asked in surprise.
 
“I was going to ask you the same thing. The debrief was supposed to start almost fifteen minutes ago.” When Sheppard just turned back to cleaning his gun, Rodney stepped the rest of the way into the room and let the door slide shut behind him. “But you knew that already, didn’t you?”
 
John looked down the barrel to assess his work. Thorough.  He’d give himself that this time around. Damn thorough. “Didn’t really feel much up to explaining myself. Weir wouldn’t let me off the hook with a simple, I shot and killed Kolya, end of story. She’d want to examine it from all directions, take me aside at the end and suggest that maybe I should go and stop by Heightmeyer’s office.”
 
“Do you think, maybe, you should?” McKay sat on the edge of the bed nearest the desk, his eyes flicking meaningfully toward the gun pieces on the table.
 
“No, I don’t.” He moved to the slide, wiping it down briskly. “I don’t need to talk about it.” What was there to talk about when I did it, he added silently.
 
Rodney glanced around the room awkwardly then changed the topic. “I wish Lucius had felt the same way. I don’t think he could stop talking even if his life depended on it… which it actually did today.”
 
“He had the personal shield,” Sheppard shrugged in explanation.
 
“What I can’t figure out is how he was able to eat and drink with that thing on. I mean, I couldn’t when I was wearing the one. And it’s not like he could turn it off and on by himself since he doesn’t have the gene.”
 
John grinned then, real and genuine, for the first time all day. “That’s really bugging the hell out of you, isn’t it?”
 
“Well, I could have died of dehydration when I put it on and that hack was able to figure out how to keep that from happening.   I mean, we’re talking about me here, Rodney McKay, the foremost expert on Ancient technology pretty much anywhere, compared to a con artist who has to steal our mission reports to have something to talk about with the wenches at Disney’s new Ye Olden Middle Ages Strip Club.”
 
“That town did make me wonder when they had opened a Hooter’s in colonial Williamsburg.”
 
“It hardly fair seems fair that he gets the women straight off the St. Pauli Girl labels and the unfettered use of the personal shield.”
 
“You really don’t get it?” John asked in surprise before picking up the next piece of his gun and starting in on it. “He wasn’t scared, Rodney.”
 
“I wasn’t scared.” McKay sat a little straighter and his chin rose in defiance of Sheppard’s conclusion.
 
“No, you were terrified, and for good reason. Lucius, for all his talk and bravado, has really never had much of a reason to be scared. Maybe after today he has, but I doubt he’s smart enough to learn from his mistakes. You, on the other hand, are so smart you can extrapolate disaster out of thin air.”
 
“Well, for all my ingenuity at seeing the potential for imminent death, it hasn’t stopped me from walking through the gate.” It was part defense, part pride, and part what the hell am I thinking?
 
“No, it hasn’t,” John agreed with the same combination of emotions.
 
Rodney flushed slightly at the implied compliment. “Oh, well, as long as you see who’s the better man between me and Lucius.”
 
Wry eyebrows rose as John started to reassemble the gun. “Well, Lucius didn’t have me clean his room while I was under the influence of mind-controlling drugs.”
 
The flush reddened in embarrassment. “Technically I didn’t tell you to clean my room. You asked how you could help and that was one of several items on the list.”
 
“All of which I did, or would have done if Elizabeth hadn’t stopped you.”
 
McKay ignored the indignation in John’s voice and grimaced at the lost opportunity. “Yeah, that’s really too bad considering I was coming up with some rather interesting stuff to try the next go around.”
 
“So sorry to disappoint you, McKay.” Hazel eyes rolled before they returned to the task of putting the gun back together.
 
“Actually, I think you might have enjoyed a few of them.” Hand flew to break up his lingering thoughts on the matter. “But that’s neither here nor there.”
 
“Given that thought, I’m surprised Elizabeth trusted you enough to send you down here and find me.”
 
“Oh, she didn’t send me,” he corrected quickly. “I cut her off before she could reach the door.”
 
“And just why did you do that?”
 
“Why are you cleaning your gun?” Rodney deflected.
 
“It needed it. I fired it. When you discharge your weapon it needs to be cleaned.”
 
“You only fired one bullet, Sheppard.”
 
“One bullet’s all it took.” It was a simple statement and true and shouldn’t have been so hard to say.
 
“He deserved more,” Rodney spat. “And entire goddamn clip would have just started to scratch the surface.” John blinked to hear the same thought that he had had earlier come out of McKay. “You deserved more, too. After everything he’s done to you, he got off easy.”
 
“Dead isn’t easy, Rodney.” He spoke the words softly, in contrast to the sharp click that accompanied putting the slide back in place.
 
“Neither is thinking it about you.” Rodney was staring at him, blue eyes framed by creases of worry, but they dropped to his knees when John stared back. “I know killing someone can’t be easy, especially when there’s a… history.   But you did the right thing, Sheppard. And I’m glad he’s dead.”
 
“Me, too.”
 
“Funny,” McKay observed with a humorless laugh, “you don’t seem very happy about it.”
 
He finished with the Baretta. All that was left was the clip. Opening a box of ammo, he replaced the single missing round. It only takes one. One bullet did the trick. But in the case of Kolya, it had taken three of something else before John was able to put that son of a bitch down for good.
 
“You know, Rodney, today was the third time Kolya threatened to kill you. At some point, you have to say enough’s enough. At some point you have to say, no fucking more. At some point you have to say, you’re not taking him away from me.”
 
John had lived with the threat of people trying to kill him for a while now. In the military, in the combat zone, that was the norm, and John could live with that. What he couldn’t live with was knowing people he cared about were in danger because of him. People like Rodney, especially Rodney, who was next in line for the bullet after him, who knew it, but would always come looking for him.
 
 Always.
 
He’d lost friends and family before, it wasn’t going to happen again if he had any say in the matter, and it sure as hell wasn’t going to be McKay. 
 
“Today I said it loud and clear.” He slammed the clip home and gave the scientist, who was sitting with a mystified look on his face, a victorious grin. “There. Good as new.”
 
But leave it to Rodney to see past the façade of that smile. “Are you sure?” Although, maybe, he was asking if he was sure about something else.
 
“Close enough,” John assured.  
 
And, for now, it was. Rodney was alive and Kolya wasn’t going to change that. Not now. Not ever. Sometimes it just took a little more time and effort to clean the slate. Sometimes a task wasn’t as easy to complete as cleaning your sidearm. Sometimes it took dirtying that gun in the first place to take care of a chore that had been hanging over your head for a couple of years. And something like that took a hell of a lot more than gun oil and gauze to wipe away the regret of letting it linger like it had.
 
“I guess, given the circumstances, that’s the best we can hope for, then.”   Rodney stood, started to take a step to leave, then hesitated and sat back down. “You were wrong, Sheppard. When you said Kolya had threatened my life three times, you were wrong. It was actually four.”
 
With a hesitancy John rarely saw in the man, Rodney reached out and splayed his hand across John’s chest in a gentle mimic of the way the Wraith had fed on Sheppard when Kolya had held him captive. He could feel his heart beat against his chest, against McKay’s palm, and feel it catch in his throat when he saw the look in Rodney’s eyes. This time Rodney didn’t feel the need to look away and this time John didn’t feel the need to fight against a touch filled with slow death or flail away from the biting pain. This time it was warmth and comfort and just what he needed.  This time it was the more that he deserved.
 
This time he leaned into the touch and let Rodney wipe him clean.
 
The End






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ldyanne
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Time:2007-04-30 12:27 am (UTC)
Oh, yeah, this episode left me wanting so much more and you have filled that need nicely. Thanks!
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liketheriverrun
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Time:2007-04-30 02:11 am (UTC)
They really did miss the boat on this ep. There was such potential and once again, they decided to concentrate on appealing to the inner frat boys instead of the story they could have. But I am so happy you enjoyed the fic and thanks for the feedback!
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crownglass39
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Time:2007-04-30 01:07 am (UTC)
What an absolutely wonderful coda to an episode that really needed it. I love that Rodney knows exactly what John needs. Thank you for writing this!
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liketheriverrun
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Time:2007-04-30 02:12 am (UTC)
Well, in my world Rodney always knows exactly what John needs *G* but I'm so happy you saw it that way and enjoyed the fic! Thanks so much for the feedback!
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kristen999
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Time:2007-04-30 01:33 am (UTC)
This was very well done. I liked the combination of cleaning the gun afterwards, stripping away all that went with that one bullet.

Its odd, that the 'history' made the end of the blood fuede feel so odd. It was as if John could not believe that Kolya was finally dead, his expression right after the kill shot was of disbelief.

What Kolya did to them all was horrendous, what he did to Shep during Common Ground unspeakable...to know that the evil man was gone must have put him in such a flux.

This eppy would have been so much more..I'm glad we got this coda to it. You nailed John's thoughts and I really liked the image of Rodney placing his hand on John's chest to speak something that words could never explain.
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liketheriverrun
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Time:2007-04-30 02:15 am (UTC)
Thanks so much! I agree with everything you said. They just skimmed right over so much potential. He shoots him and then no one says anything. After everything that he had done, I would have thought someone would at least say, Thank God that's over! Something, anything. But if it wasn't for missed opportunities, we wouldn't have anything to write in fanfic *G*.
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jakisbishlygay
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Time:2007-04-30 02:12 am (UTC)
Very nice :)
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liketheriverrun
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Time:2007-04-30 02:16 am (UTC)
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!
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liketheriverrun
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Time:2007-05-01 02:20 am (UTC)
It would take a heck of a lot more than 2200 words to fill the voids left from that ep, but I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks!
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beth_green
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Time:2007-04-30 03:21 am (UTC)
>This time it was warmth and comfort and just what he needed. <

Thank you. This was just what I needed.

>John should have felt… what? Happy? Relieved? Satisfied? Because he didn’t feel any of those things. He felt numb. Numb and hollow and in need of disassembling and a thorough cleaning himself. He deserved more. After everything they had been through because of Kolya, he deserved more.<

This is just what this episode needed. You did an excellent job of summarizing what was wrong with Kolya's demise in 'Irresponsible.'

And a big Yay! for ProtectiveJohn™ being more upset that Kolya threatened to kill Rodney for the third time than for the whole personal slow-death-by-Wraith inflicted upon John.
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liketheriverrun
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Time:2007-05-01 02:24 am (UTC)
I love ProtectiveJohn! (trademarked or not...heee) And, seriously, would it kill them to show the smallest amount of emotional response? I mean this is Kolya we're talking about here! Thanks so much for the feedback, I'm glad you felt it did what set out to accomplish!
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vecturist
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Time:2007-04-30 04:14 am (UTC)
Thanks for this epilogue, Sheppard's got to be going through a few things, especially ending everything with a single shot (although a lot could have been made of that simple fact). I liked you attempt to explain the personal shield plot hole. I think this episode was an example of the writers trying to fit Tab A into Slot Z.

Loved the Hooter's in Willimamsburg comment.
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liketheriverrun
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Time:2007-05-01 02:27 am (UTC)
So much potential, so much wasted opportunities. Very frustrating. And what was up with those villagers? They were all idiots and/or bimbos. Thanks for the feedback, I'm glad you enjoyed the fic!
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saffronhouse
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Time:2007-04-30 02:03 pm (UTC)
Very satisfying tag -- nice revision of the shield! -- and a lovely conclusion. Thank you.
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liketheriverrun
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Time:2007-05-01 02:28 am (UTC)
That shield thing just bugged the hell out of me. It's like the writers hadn't even watch Hide and Seek before. And thanks so much! I'm so happy you enjoyed it!
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seperis
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Time:2007-04-30 04:58 pm (UTC)
That was lovely. Subtle and warm and *intimate*, two very close people sharing a very close, personal moment. Wonderful.
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liketheriverrun
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Time:2007-05-01 02:58 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! I really crave those intimate moments and they so rarely show them (and of course never to the degree that I do in my fics) but there are some really nice moments now and again on the show which is, I guess, what keeps me coming back for more.
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caoilin_noir
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Time:2007-04-30 05:27 pm (UTC)
At some point you have to say, no fucking more. At some point you have to say, you’re not taking him away from me.”

This is really interesting - you've managed to bring out a characterisation of Sheppard that I suppose I'd registered but that I'd never really thought of before - how the fact that his bravery is because he doesn't value himself, and that means he doesn't think he deserves things (at least, that's what I think you mean)!

Anyways, this was just the kind of episode tag that was needed. I love stargate because it's light and bouncy and fun, but sometimes, I just wish they would let a few things matter.

Also, have friended you, hope this is okay, cause I like to use my f'list to see what is going on rather than flicking around various pages.
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liketheriverrun
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Time:2007-05-01 03:04 am (UTC)
I'm not sure it's not so much that John doesn't value himself, it's that he values others more. He's very self-sacrificing, especially for those he cares for. The irony in this fic, for me, was that by putting Rodney first, he actually he actually got what he needed most. It's a very symbiotic relationship they have.

And, yes, I enjoy the characters being in peril but not having to worry about them in the end, but occassionally feeling the ramifications for their actions would be nice now and again. The few times that they have, it's usually been one of my favorite eps.

And friend away! *G* The more the merrier! Thanks so much for the feedback, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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ozsaur
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Time:2007-04-30 05:31 pm (UTC)
I do like your tag for Irresponsible, it ties things up nicely. Filled a void left by canon. Enjoyed your story very much!
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liketheriverrun
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Time:2007-05-01 03:05 am (UTC)
Thank you! For me, that's what fanfic is for, filling the voids. I'm not sure if it's a good thing or bad one that SGA tends to have so many *G*.
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clarkangel
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Time:2007-04-30 08:47 pm (UTC)
Perfect and utterly satisfying, in a way the ep will never be. Thank you.
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liketheriverrun
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Time:2007-05-01 03:06 am (UTC)
Thank you! I've always thought that some of the least satisfying episodes lead to some of the best fodder for fic.
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shendara
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Time:2007-04-30 10:02 pm (UTC)
Beautiful. This is what should have been in the episode (among other things). I really love your view of John and Rodney.
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liketheriverrun
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Time:2007-05-01 03:07 am (UTC)
Sigh. If only they would have something like this in an episode. I'd have a coronary right where I sat if they did. Thanks so much for the lovely feedback. I'm so happy you enjoyed the fic!
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mmmchelle
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Time:2007-04-30 10:22 pm (UTC)
What a marvelous peek into John's head. Thank you. The end of his conflict with Kolya definitely merited more attention than the writers gave it, and you've fixed that.
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liketheriverrun
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Time:2007-05-01 12:59 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much! I'm really happy you enjoyed it!

And, btw, I've slowly been making my way through the Surfacing zine, which is a shame since they are really wonderful and deserve to be devoured in one sitting, but I just wanted to say that I enjoyed Left-Handed Relationship. Porn within porn and yet so much more! *G* Loved that last line!
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ex_darklock507
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Time:2007-05-01 05:37 am (UTC)
*awestruck* I love it when an author can seemingly reach into my heart and give it a good squeeze. This is amazingly deep and very satisfying. Thanks!
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liketheriverrun
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Time:2007-05-01 01:01 pm (UTC)
Awww, thanks so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. It's been a while since I've been accused of being deep *G*.
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