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Subject:FIC: Beast of Burden (SGA Gen)
Time:06:43 pm
Title: Beast of Burden

Category: Gen, emotional h/c, episode tag to Sunday

Word Count:
~7600

Rating:

Pairings: None

Characters: John and Rodney with Ronon

Warnings: None 

Spoilers: Anything up through Sunday is fair game and seeing as it's a tag, Sunday is hit hard.

A/N:  Special thanks to Koschka for the beta.  I have to say that as much as there were certain things I *hated* about Sunday (TPTB are evil bastards!!!), there were parts I truly enjoyed.  Suprisingly, Ronon was one of those thing, which is why this is in his POV and as such, it fits into my POV series.

Summary: Ronon's POV as John and Rodney come to terms with the events of Sunday and the burdens they have to bear.

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mtee
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Time:2007-06-08 05:07 pm (UTC)
Very good. I actually wasn't going to watch Sunday because I hate crying at a show. But how could I not watch. So I cried and wondered how very different it's going to be without Carson. I'm hoping, but not expecting to see Shep deal with it in some way.

You tackled this subject very well. It was poignant without being overtly mushy. Ronon's POV allowed the reader to disassociate to some degree. We could read without crying all over the keyboard. It was sad, but meaningful (if that makes sense).

Thank you.
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liketheriverrun
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Time:2007-06-09 05:10 am (UTC)
Yeah, I think you can hope all you want for Sheppard's reaction, I seriously doubt we'll see it. But, hey, that's what fanfic is for, I guess *G*. Thanks so much for the feedback!
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obfreak
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Time:2007-06-10 11:08 am (UTC)
Damn you!
Why do I read this stuff?!
I literally had to stop reading this at 3 points to bawl my eyes out.
Man this was so good, it had me mourning for them all over again. Man how I miss Caron.
Love how you tied in scenes from the episode, and how you had Rodney pull them all together in the end. Great job, I hated it in the fact that it was so good it had me feeling miserable for the next few hours :P Which trust me, is a very good compliment... I've confused myself *goes to cry some more*
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liketheriverrun
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Time:2007-06-12 01:47 am (UTC)
I have to admit that I got a little teary eyed writing it a few times, so I'll take that as a compliment. *G* I'm sorry it upset you, but glad that you liked it all the same. Thanks so much for the feedback!
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pansychubb
Subject:Well done
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Time:2007-06-13 08:18 pm (UTC)
Beautifully done, as always.

Thanks for reccing it to me! (I'm Pansy Chubb/LilRicki from the SGAHC Yahoo group . . .)

-Pansy Chubb
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liketheriverrun
Subject:Re: Well done
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Time:2007-06-14 05:06 am (UTC)
Thanks so much! It's probably not *exactly* what you were looking for but hopefully it had enough of a taste to satisfy. *G* I'm so happy you enjoyed it!
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docfred
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Time:2007-06-18 02:00 am (UTC)
excellent tag to sunday. you set the mood for the piece perfectly. the bits of humor thrown in during the grieving process was well done and you nailed the boys reactions to the loss of carson.
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liketheriverrun
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Time:2007-06-21 02:18 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! Tags to this ep are definitely tricky and I'm glad you think I pulled it off.
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